Please review. Are we making something that is useful?

[Hendro]

Hi,

Since most of you guys are experienced tech-people, can you please have a look on our business?

Are we making something useful? Please bear in mind that it's still work in progress and we're still working on a lot of the parts. Just curious if we're on the right track.

Links:
http://blindoptimists.com

Invitation code: bos.sandtable

Thanks in advance.

[Dave Collins]

Hi Hendro,

I'm a great believer in first impressions, and when looking at a website, I believe that the main page should answer a few key questions.

What is it?

No idea. I know it's something to do with cash management, but what? For businesses? Consumers? Will it work in my currency? What does it actually do? How does it work? How much does it cost?

What do I do now?

No idea. I don't want to "sign up" as I don't know what you're offering. And the button saying "Try no (no signup)" isn't clear.

What should I click on?

As far as I can see there are no real links. I can take a survey (?), share the link (??), try it, or sign up.

It's too much hard work. There's no information whatsoever.

You may well have a fantastic service or tool, but your website tells me nothing.

We're running another website critique next Tuesday the 23rd. You might find it useful.

In the meantime, put some information on that page!

[Hendro]

Sure, thanks Dave for your input.
I'll make sure to work on it. =)

Dave Collins said:

Hi Hendro,

I'm a great believer in first impressions, and when looking at a website, I believe that the main page should answer a few key questions.

What is it?

No idea. I know it's something to do with cash management, but what? For businesses? Consumers? Will it work in my currency? What does it actually do? How does it work? How much does it cost?

What do I do now?

No idea. I don't want to "sign up" as I don't know what you're offering. And the button saying "Try no (no signup)" isn't clear.

What should I click on?

As far as I can see there are no real links. I can take a survey (?), share the link (??), try it, or sign up.

It's too much hard work. There's no information whatsoever.

You may well have a fantastic service or tool, but your website tells me nothing.

We're running another website critique next Tuesday the 23rd. You might find it useful.

In the meantime, put some information on that page!